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A Single Cell

02 Jun

"Living and Breathing"

A single cell moving from one space to another
A moment of awakening, a day of removal.
It must have sensed a friction
That emotional tie it binds
Will be removed and never seen.

A momentum of machines
Everything gone.
An hour or so to encounter
Every hope disappears
With a regret to succumb for a lifetime.

An expectant soul, speculating the outside world
Hopeful of another day.
But dreams come to an end
To end a souls growing beginning
A beginning to live.

Then a wave of dismissal
Utters a sigh of relief
A prayer answered, even before it was spoken
A predetermined decision
To pass on for generations.

A single cell moving from one space to another
Clinging to a tie that binds
Together mother and child
The moment of awakening, to the day of removal
Ready for the beginning of Life.

words…my heart.. my poem

a life’s desire to fulfill

my mind..soul, entwined.

 

I would like to nominate moonscribbles

http://moonscribbles.wordpress.com/2011/05/04/just-sometimes/

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38 Comments

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38 responses to “A Single Cell

  1. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom

    June 2, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    oh how lovely! nice delivery of imagery!

     
  2. Jingle

    June 2, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    the bond between a mother and a child is unbreakable.

    superb and reflective words.
    love the image you choose, Happy Rally.
    🙂

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 2, 2011 at 3:47 PM

      thank you for your comment Jingle.. most appreciated! ;]

       
  3. Isabel Bush

    June 2, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    lovely

     
  4. Daydreamertoo

    June 2, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    Amazing isn’t it, life?
    Your words have captured it so beautifully.

     
  5. Mr Blaque

    June 2, 2011 at 8:12 PM

    I love how the progress of the cell traveled through the words ending with a connection, well written.

     
  6. Henry Clemmons

    June 2, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Your presentation was superb. Loved the word choices and line developement. ENjoyed the line: Ready for the beginning of life.

    http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/stray-rays-poets-rally-45.html

     
  7. meiro

    June 3, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    Love this poem, esp the last stanza.
    Beautifully done.

     
  8. wolfsrosebud

    June 3, 2011 at 5:51 AM

    Beautifully written. Your progression flowed nicely. What a great comparison you’ve painted for the reader.

     
  9. mindlovemisery

    June 3, 2011 at 6:30 AM

    Beautiful poem, I can’t help but look at my daughter and smile. She really is the only miracle I’ve ever created.

     
  10. veronicadimarco

    June 3, 2011 at 7:37 AM

    Thank you very much for all your praises and support. It pushes myself to write for more.

    Thank you very much!

     
  11. Kelly

    June 3, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    i love the pirouette of your words here, beautiful.

     
  12. magher1

    June 3, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    The miracle of life. Well put!

     
  13. PremI

    June 4, 2011 at 2:01 AM

    A lovely write and a beautiful picture to adorn it…

     
  14. veronicadimarco

    June 4, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    yes i believe too so… it kind of depicts a picture of how it feels to save a life

     
  15. veronicadimarco

    June 4, 2011 at 6:29 AM

    Thanks for your support and comments
    ;] i really appreciate it!

     
  16. K. McGee

    June 4, 2011 at 6:40 AM

    You’ve done a remarkable job of accentuating a lovely and powerful moment in a mother’s life through the journey of awakened soul she carries inside. Indeed a bond like no other.

     
  17. Adelaide Mankato

    June 5, 2011 at 5:04 AM

    I once got into an argument with someone who told me that there was no such thing as miracles. I told him, “What aboutt he creation of life?” He still said it didn’t count, but I think you’ve capture well here why it does. I’ve always wanted to have children, but, sadly, it has not happened.

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 6, 2011 at 10:18 AM

      thank you very much for your comment.

      Even if you have don’t have that gift of bearing children, God could have given you a different gift, just similar to being a mother. At some point of your life, maybe you have that instinct of nurturing and caring – – acts of being a mother. That counts as a gift too.
      Not all women bearing child are good nurturer of children…

       
  18. Genebrother

    June 5, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    I see mother and child on a journey
    A journey that was to be
    A decision to continue life
    And not to let it end.

    Thank you

    Genebrother

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 6, 2011 at 10:22 AM

      Yes. thank you very much for your reply Gene. That’s what I exactly meant.. ;]

       
  19. Ryme Me a Smile

    June 5, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    What lovely imagery!

     
  20. veronicadimarco

    June 6, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    Thanks for your supports! ;]

     
  21. poetryoftheasian

    June 8, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    This poem was very well written! Beautiful poem!

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 10, 2011 at 6:26 AM

      thank you very much! i really appreciate this! ;]

       
  22. Nelson

    June 11, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    Very well written! Keep up the fantastic work! . Visit me too.I hope you have a great weekend

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 12, 2011 at 3:55 PM

      thank you very much nelson! i hope you do too have a great week! sure I will visit you anytime! ;]

       
  23. Jingle

    June 12, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    thanks for the award acceptance, please nominate a poet for week 46 if you wish.

    comment to let me know,

    Cheers.

     
    • veronicadimarco

      June 17, 2011 at 7:32 PM

      yes Jingle I will… only that I really have a hard time.. uhmmm working out on the *nominate thing*
      I don’t know how to do that… I had been trying to find it out for myself.. i have like many people to nominate too….
      just been to uhmmmm shy to ask LOL!!!
      — sorry… *sigh*

       
  24. belladonna23

    June 13, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    very sweet….

     
  25. Becca Givens

    July 2, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Beautifully captured ~~ congratulations on your award! Well deserved!

     
  26. moonscribbles

    December 3, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    this is late but congrats on the award!!!….was out of the blogging community for months and didn’t know that you nominated me…….thank you……
    hope to read more of your poetry now that am back 🙂

     

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