My crazy rhymes….

17 Sep

Picture me..picture you.

A rainbow sparkles in the blue,
Does taking pictures work for you?
Chipmunk tried to push his luck
Showed his tongue and angered the duck!

The deer and squirrel asked the bunny,
Go to the cow for milk and honey.
The cow so eager so obviously did hear
Giving milk to the bunny is not what I fear.

The rainbow the cow wants to cross
A beautiful day and not a dew on the moss
Challenge the butterfly the bunny said
The cow can fly, and very well said!

Now the story ends, I don’t know how
The butterfly now will challenge the cow
Do you think this will end right now?
For sure, I’m a little bit confused just how….


Posted by on September 17, 2011 in Uncategorized


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16 responses to “My crazy rhymes….

  1. Morning

    September 17, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    this is creative, you rock.


    way to go, have fun!

  2. bendedspoon

    September 17, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    ahaha! not ending right now after you fed those wonderful imaginations πŸ™‚

  3. veronicadimarco

    September 17, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    @Morning: thank you very much for your comment… we both rock! πŸ˜€ hahah!!!

    @bendedspoon: heheh thank you so much, I had a hard time…hahah I’m not so good with children’s literature.. but I’m glad you both like it! ;D

  4. Inside the Mind of Isadora

    September 18, 2011 at 4:45 AM

    Fun description of all the characters in the pix.
    Very nice,

    stop by and visit:

  5. Inside the Mind of Isadora

    September 18, 2011 at 4:47 AM

    oops … left something out on my url … sorry for the double message .

    • veronicadimarco

      September 19, 2011 at 2:12 AM

      @Isadora: no problem… your poems are fantastic… very beautiful. will keep visitng.. thank you for your comment. πŸ™‚

  6. The Orange Tree

    September 18, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    enjoyed it, your words take us far and wide.


  7. veronicadimarco

    September 19, 2011 at 2:13 AM

    @The Orange Tree: thank you very much for your comment! πŸ™‚

  8. Jeanie McBain

    September 19, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    Loved reading your words, most enjoyable πŸ™‚

  9. veronicadimarco

    September 19, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    @Jeanie McBain: thank you very much… it was worth a try! πŸ˜€

  10. charlesmashburn

    September 20, 2011 at 8:54 AM

  11. veronicadimarco

    September 20, 2011 at 6:15 PM


    thank you for commenting on mine… very much appreciated…! πŸ™‚

  12. fiveloaf

    September 22, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    exqusitely crafted!

  13. e.a.s. demers

    September 26, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Wonderful! πŸ™‚
    well done!!!

  14. brian

    October 8, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    ha. this was a lot of fun to read…well played against the pic!

  15. The Purple Treehouse

    November 4, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    you truly spent time on this one, well done.


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